Them Bones

So maintaing the feel of digital oriented art work I had a go at designing this little number today. Should you have time or feel constructive, then any criticism/ feedback would be appreciated. Thanks!
 

I believe them bones are me
Some say we're born into the grave
I feel so alone
Gonna end up a big ole pile a them bones


Dust rise right on over my time
Empty fossil of the new scene
I feel so alone
Gonna end up a big ole pile a them bones

Toll due bad dream come true
I lie dead gone under red sky
I feel so alone
Gonna end up a big ole pile a them bones

"Them Bones" - Alice in Chains